araby

i think that the author is a older version of the boy in the story

a dark, dank, blind street.

he wanted to go to the bazzar thingy but he had to go to school

tin the end hes under control of that girl his girlfriend

she thinks that he is a creep and they have never spoken before

the feel that they ae on lock down because they never get out of the house

what he dreams and thinks of is all going down the whole and reality is sitting in

to me his tone is scared because his uncle is there it seems as though he is aafraid of his uncle and needs to hide from him

i believe that they fit and are approiate because it sets the tone and gives the reader a picture in his or her mind

i think that it may have gone a little far but its realistic at the same time and i think that this ending was perfect and that it does not ned another one